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PARINEETA PART 23

PART 23

 a special thanxx to anu di (hermoso) without whom this update would not have been possible!!!

thank u sooo much diii Hug

 

Geet had dozed off in the car itself. Aryan carried her into her room and made her lie on the bed. She had a smile on lips yet tear drops at the corner of her eyes! He wiped that lone tear and kissed her forehead!!

Aryan: you are an angel geet… just ask me..and I’ll set you free!!!

 

Meanwhile in Delhi

Dia: namla..dekho…meli flock (=frock)

Namra: chalo chalo packing karo..

Maan came into their room..he was just back from office and heard noises from his princesses room. He peeped in and looked at the cuties trying to get their things ready to leave for Mumbai. He stood there for a while watching them…he smiled and saw dia having troubles in doing her clothes..and even namra. They are sooo small!!!! His eyes filled up…the nanny cannot stay with them 24/7 right!!! Wish he could fill that empty space in their lives!!!

 

It was almost a week since that night!! Everything was going smooth! Geet was doing great in her job and Aryan in his! Prem was still in Mumbai enjoying with them. They were having dinner when Prem popped the question, “geet…its your birthday 2 days later..we want party!!

Geet smiled and continued to eat. Roops joined Prem, “yes yes iss baar tho we want something special!!!

Prem: yes geet… you have always avoided your bday for the past few years but not now!!! Iss baar hum tho party le kar rahenge!!”

Aryan was listening to them quietly and looked at geet! She was just quietly listening to all of them! He realized Prem and Roops were trying to get back ‘geet’ that’s why they are talking about partying on her birthday. He couldn’t help going back to the day she was in college 3rd year and he was still in Delhi to complete his masters.

 

Flashback

He had gone to meet geet in college and also to get some certificates. And since they had late classes that day.. he got to see a new scene there! His eyes literally popped out. there was geet madam…in all her glory..running from one person to another shouting, “oyeee kal mera bday hain..mujhe wish karna okie!!!

 

Ohh god..he felt he;d faint right there! She didn’t even bother about her seniors and juniors..she was happily announcing her bday and asking everyone to wish her gift her..bhale hi koi gift kare na kare!!LOL She was jumping around like a little kid excited for her bday…no one would guess she was turning 20!!! Geet saw Aryan and came running to him and shouted, “Aryan..aryan..aryan…kal mera bday hain..tum na..umm han han mujhe 00:00hrs me phone karke wish karna okie!!!!

He couldn’t stop laughing seeing that much excitement in her!

Geet: aur han..if you could gift..that would also be awesum!!!!”

 

Present

Aryan looked at geet again..she was not at all interested n her bday conversation. He sighed and looked at Prem.

Aryan: umm why don’t you guys let geet decide what she wants to do on her bday?

Roops: umm..good idea..but it should better be a good one!!!

Prem turned to geet, “chal bata..tujhe kya karna hain apne bday pe?

Geet shrugged, “umm..kuch nahi.. I will take a day off!!!

Roops: what??? Geet…whats happened to you yaar? Tu apna bday nahi celebrate kar rahi???

 

Aryan: ok ok relax…I’ll take you ladies shopping okay!! That’s the best gift to a lady I guess…right Prem!”

Prem sighed, “yep right…I think mujhe sanyaas le lena chahiye!!! Paise aur waqt dono bach jaate hain!!!

Roops glared at him and he shut up. Their nok jhok went on..but geet remained lost. She excused herself in the middle and walked to her room saying she was done and that she was feeling tired!

The three of them looked at each other not able to understand geet’s sudden change in mood!

 

Meanwhile in Delhi

Maan stood in front of his wardrobe..Wondering what to pack and what not to!!!! He ran his hands on his clothes and then opened the other cupboard! His eyes filled up…and his heart ached. It had all Anisha’s and his clothing together,.. kept properly…just the way she liked and just the way she had left it last!!! He moved his hand over it…..tears welled down his eyes!

Maan: why did you go away? I really can’t see namra and dia struggling so much in such a young age and probably I am the worst father in this world…am not able to take good care of them!!! Waapis aa jao Anisha…please…

He felt down and sat on the floor and placed his head on the bed…cursing himself..cursing his fate!!! Just then dia and namra came running into his room. They saw Maan sitting like that! dia rolled her eyes and poked her tiny index finer in his shoulder. Maan looked up at his two angels and namra wiped huis tears!

 

Namra; papa aap sad ho?

Maan smiled, “nahi beta..am not sad!!”

Dia: phil why clying?

Namra looked around the room and found his wardrobe open!!!

\namra: aap phir se dress select nahi kar paa rahe ho na?  koi na..dia and me will help you! Don’t be sad!!

She pulled dia by her hand and dragged her to the wardrobe and stared at it carefully. Maan wondered what these kids are upto!!! And  followed them and stood behind them!!!

 

Namra: umm chalo chalo wo blue wali shirt nikalo papa..

Maan smiled and took out the blue shirt.

Dia: wo… wo…. Gley (grey) tie bhi..

Maan followed her order.

Namra: 2 pair jeans..

Dia: offish wali dless…

Namra: black coat

Dia: white shirt..

Mr Maan Singh khurana actually followed all the orders his darlings threw on him! And by the end of it… his suitcase was full and girls were no where near stopping!

 

Maan laughed, “arrey poora wardrobe lekar jana hain kya? That’s it..my suitcase s full!!!

Namra had a wide smile on her face, “dekha… ho gaya na!!! aap rona mat papa…

Dia: yesh yesh don’t cly..

He kissed the two and lifted both of them in his arms and carried them to their bedroom.

 

She shut the door with a bang behind her and leaned back on the door..lost in her thoughts! Her birthday…huh!! Its so meaningless without him!!! She went near the window and sat on the pane…overlooking the garden. She rested her head against the window frame and closed her eyes…feeling the cool night breeze!!! It brought back some memories to her…. very sweet ones… dear to life……sweet memories….

 

Flashback

It was almost afternoon and geet was lying on her bed, sulking! It was her birthday and madam was totally upset!!! She got what she wanted…people had called her the previous night at 00:00hrs to wish her as she had ordered…but there was one call she had been waiting for…. That one call she never got the entire night! She waited and waited and waited.. but there was no call from his side!!! She thought for a while… he never forgets her bday in fact he is always the 1st on to wish her..then why not today? Her excitement was dying out. she called him and his number came busy! Strange..even Anisha hadn’t called her!! she fell on the bed, probably understanding what must have happened and that night flashed in her mind where she had witnessed the love between Maan and Anisha…the finale night! She looked at the shelf..the trophy still lied there… but probably with a no meaning! That pinched her somewhere inside….but she ignored and slept off! She had been feeling a bit lonely nowadays…. Probably some where she was realizing that Maan was slipping out of her hands! But she didn’t mind Maan with Anisha.. he was happy right! And she’ll always be with him..no matter what! she could fight her brain so easily..but not her heart!!!

Maan came to her place later around 11:30am bunking his class just because he had realized he missed wishing geet on her bday and she’d be so mad at him!!! And as a punishment..geet had asked him to get her guitar strings that needed replacement and her favorite black forest cake!!! Maan was gone..but she couldn’t stop feeling miserable… why did it seem that Maan was slipping away? Why was she feeling this restless without him?

 

She waited and waited and waited..and slept off eventually. It was around 3 in the afternoon when Anisha came into her room carrying a big fat book in her hands. It was the 2nd time she was coming to Geet’s place..the 1st time she had come was to drop geet home from college and had  met Jasmeet and she really loved her demeanor. She saw geet sleeping peacefully… her hair was open.. and fell on her face. She went and quietly sat beside her and removed the hair from her face….she could see trail of tears on her cheeks… was she crying? She looked so much at peace… Anisha smiled!!!

Anisha: aap jitni masoom dikhti hain geet..utni hi maasoom dil se hain!!!

Suddenly something struck her brain. She went around and entangled the end of her dupatta with geet’s hair and pulls her! geet twitched a bit but then again slept off. Anisha giggled and this time..she pulled a bit harder. Geet got up angrily shouting, “Maan..aaj teri khair nahi!!” and she tried to reach for the person who did that!!!

Anisha burst out laughing seeing geet’s reaction. Geet rubbed her eyes and opened her eyes wider only to see Anisha in front of her!

Geet: di..aap yahan?

Anisha went around and hugged her, “happy birthday geet…many mnay happy returns of the day..bhagwaan kare..aapko duniya ki saari khushiyan mile..

Geet hugged her back, “thank you sooo much di…..”

Anisha: waise aap itni naraz kyun lag rahi thi Maan par?

Geet made a face and spoke, “ye jo aapka Maan hai na di…. Arrghh he irritates me to hell…pareshaan kar rakha hai mujhe..”

Anisha: hahaha acha..jaise aap kuch nahi karti???

 

Geet: aap mazak uda rahi ho mera? Ek tho maan idiot ne mujhe aaj wish nahi kiya,…upar se meri punishment poori nahi kar raha hai…aur us gadhe ke chakkar mein aaj meine kuch bhi nahi khaya hain pata hain!”

Anisha; arrey nahi nahi.. hum tho bas aise hi bol rahe the!! Acha… Maan ko chodiye..aaj humare saath chaliye!! Aaj dinner aap humare saath karengi..maa ne aapko aur maan ko bulaya hain ghar par aur hum aapko lene aaye hain..

Geet got super excited, ‘oh my god..this will be the 1st time am goingto your place di….

Anisha: yes..now please get ready… we’ll be leaving after half an hour! And this is your bday treat from us!

 

Geet’s eyes fell on the huge book Anisha was carrying with her. she picked up the book and looked at Anisha and then at the book as if it was some 8th wonder of the world!!

Geet: ye kya hain??

Anisha: book hain geet….ye aapko bhi pata hain!!!

Geet; no..i mean… its title di..’PARINEETA..’..kitna ajeeb naam hain!!!

Anisha laughed, “ajeeb nahi..indian name hain! it’s the English translated version of Sharat Chandra Chattopadhyay’s most famous Bengali novel Parineeta!

Geet: parineeta… aarey haan..iske upar ek movie bhi thi na… mujhe tho naam hi samajh mein nahi aaya..tho meine movie dekhi bhi nahi!!! By the way..what does that mean di?

 

That brought a smile on Anisha’s face. She had been an avid reader and she loved classics and her thoughts were so channelized.

geet PARINEETA ka matlab hota hai EK doosre ke sath parinay karna

Geet rolled her eyes, “di…now what does ‘parinay’ mean?

parinay ka simple meaning hai marriage yani shaadi . Ek doosre se shaadi karna geet .Par geet maloom parineeta ka asli arth kya hai .,vivah ke bandhan mein bandhana ,ek doosre ka saath nibhana ,saath janamo ke rishta se bhi upar hai . humare anusaar do atmaon ka milan hai parineeta , do roohuon ka samlagn jahan pyar, ishq ,mohabbat  jaise shabdon  ki bhi bandishen na ho..

 

Geet looked at Anisha..awed by her choice of words….the way her eyes twinkled while she said ‘parineeta’… it touched her…the glow on Anisha’s face made her realize may be this word has a meaning way deeper that what Anisha was saying….

pyaar..ishq..mohabbat jaise shabdon ki bandihein na ho..” she repeated under her breath.. that just got etched in her heart!!! It felt so beautiful…..probably devine!!!!

ek aisa parinay jahan ek doosre se koi khwaish hi nahi ho, aap unse  sirf selfless pyar kare . Woh aisa pyar hai jahan koi bhi bandhishon ka mohtaj na ho , jahan pyar shabd bhi apne aap se pyar kare . ek doosri ke aankhon mein us ek pyar ki zhalak dekh kar  hi aapko pighla de aur aap ke hone ka ehsaas dilaye .Use sahi mayno mein parinay kehthe hai .

aur jo aisa pyar kar paati wo parineeta kehlati hai..geet stood numb…. Anisha’s words sent jitters down her spine..

pyaar bhi apne aap se pyaar kare…parineeta…” is this even possible..she wondered!!! Does such kind of thing even exists in this world??

 

Present

pyaar..ishq..mohabbat ki koi bandishein na ho..” she smiled as tears rolled down her eyes!!!! She missed him… she wanted to see him..bas ek baar…. Ek baar ussey baat kare..she wanted to see if he was alright… but then one question popped into her mind.. does he even need geet anymore? Her bday was so meaningless… there was no Maan to celebrate… there was no Maan to irritate her… there was no Maan wo take her breath away…there was no Maan jiske upar wo apna haq jata sake… and probably this is why there was no ‘geet’ either!!!

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Dadima, dia and namra waited in the car…all angry. It was already time to leave and sir was taking so long!! After 5 mins the three of them saw him walking towards them..busy in a call. He got into the car and gestured the driver to drive them towards the airport!!!!

Dia and namra were super excited! They were going out like this probably for the 1st time… and Dadima had her own plans too. She had her contacts and she’ll be using all of them to find a girl for Maan… who should be able to fill the void in the kids’ lives and as well as Maan!!!

She was lost in her plans all the way..dia and namra were asleep and Maan was continuously looking into files!!! All of them had their own plans..but least did they know that destiny had already played her card!

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next: i saw angel…Embarrassed

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PARINEETA PART 22



latest banner..by shruthe di and me!! now tell me hows it??Wink
sorry for being late guys..college started and me getting super tired at the end of the day!Ouch freshers party was rocking..sang a duet with a senior and bechara he was blushing! mad fellow!Angry and played a game with another senior whr we had to knot a tie around the senior guys’ neck in shortest possible time and i won it also!!Big smile yuuhoo and now hectic classes..dozing off in the 1st bench only!!!!
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short update..pls bear with now! from now onwards i’ll be keeping busy. so can’t promise regular updates..will update at-most twice a week!!!!

and those who think this is not a maaneet ff.. pls refrain from reading this! am too hurt with the kind of comments am seeing lately in my threadBroken Heart CryCryand its better that i be completely straight forward with you all!!! kindly discontinue this ff if you think i should open sum maan anisha forumAngry and just get lost!Cry  SO THIS IS WHAT I GET FOR TRYING TO BE DIFFERENT IN MY OWN WAY!Ouch in any case parineeta is going to be my last ff!!!

A BIG THANK U TO ALL THOSE WHO HAVE SUPPORTED ME THROUGHOUT THIS FF..I LOVE U ALL A LOTHug.
can’t evn describe what it means to me!!! hope you’ll support me till the end!!!

PART 22

Geet dressed up in her faded jeans and sleeveless red top looking ravishing. Her hairs curled and her lips drowned in a shade of deep red!!! She was happy today…. Yes very happy indeed!!! Before leaving she looked at the mirror for one last time and smiled and suddenly did a little bhangra.

Geet: congratulations and celebrations……. I know aaj tum bahut khush hoge…I wish duniya ke saare awards tumhe mil jayen..!!

She gave a flying kiss to her own image in the mirror and ran out.

Aryan and Roops were already there in the car, waiting for her. geet hopped in looking unusually happy. Aryan looked at her for a while…he had never seen her this happy or excited about disc. She was a person who loved to do masti..but disc was something far away from her list. She preferred staying away…. But she is probably changed now..a lot, especially what happened with her! and he knew she was doing all this just to have an escape from reality and not because she was genuinely interested. But today she was looking very bright…. Very  happy!!! He smiled seeing her excitement..must be some o0ther reason to escape reality.he chuckled how she had found out about his whereabouts after that finale night!

Flashback

It was week since Aryan was missing and geet and Roops were breaking their head over it. Prem as usual was super lost in a world only he knew of!

Prem: stop it guys..he will be fine! Itna dimaag mat chalao..zyada hain bhi nahi!!

Roops: ha ha as if you have that much brain! Shut up and let us work.

Geet was trying his cell again and again but no avail.

Prem: I think someone has kidnapped him!

Geet and Roops: what???

Prem: umm..aisa mujhe lagta hain..

Roops rolled her eyes, “phir tho aryan bilkul safe and sound hain!

Geet: phir bhi yaar..lets check on him na.. may be he is unwell or something! Umm..roops..tere paas tho uske ghar ka address hain na…

Roops: yep.. I do! Okie tho aaj college ke baad challenge okay!

Prem yawned, “tum dono please ek detective agency khol lo….and ye tho hona hi tha na.. Roops ne usey pagal jo kar rakha hain…he needs holiday from her! let him relax!

Roops fumed while geet hit him hard on his shoulder, “shut up…and to burst your bubble..you are going with us!!

Prem: no ways man… I will get back to the hostel and sleep!!!

Geet stood up and shouted, “excuse me ma’am… Prem has copied my assignment and has been threatening me…‘”

Prem panicked and put his hands around geet’s mouth and pulled her down. Roops burst out laughing, gesturing him to look around. There was no professor and the rest were laughing at him! He shot a glare to  geet, “wait wait… ek din iska badla zarur loonga..”

Geet; tab ki tab dekhenge..but as of now, you are coming with us!!!

Just when the college got over, geet hurried to her car (of course her mumma’s car wo bhi AudiWink) and got in. Roops and Prem followed and jumped in. Roops directed and the three of them reached a very post apartment around Connaught place!

Prem: chalo chalo..hum galat address pea aye hain..

Roops: nahi this is the correct address…

Prem: nahi yaar..ye tho kisi rayees zaade ka ghar lagta hain..aryan jaisa chota sa nanha munna bacha yahan thode rahega..

Geet: will you shut up?

prem: do i have an option?

They knocked the door and mohan opened it. He asked them to wait for him as Aryan wasn’t back home. He went into the kitchen and tried to call Aryan but again his phone came switched off. He served them snacks and water. The 3 of them were super surprised to see such a posh apartment of Aryans. But then it was around 7 and Aryan hadn’t turned up. They had been waiting for more than an hour. Geet was getting impatient.

Geet; mohan bahiyya…do you know where he is? We are worried sick and wo tho apne darshan hi nahi de raha…

And probably Mohan knew these were the only best friends Aryan had. He gave them the address which shocked the three of them like anything.

The three of them drove towards their destination and stopped near the entrance. So they need to break through the security! They sighed…dost ke liye bhi kya kya karna padta hain! they actually managed to put up some silly excuse and get in.

Geet hated the place… typically dark disc.. with loud music.. girls dressed scantily, people smoking and drinking….she felt very uneasy as if she’d puke!! walked ahead trying to look through the darkness and turned back to look for Roops and Prem but she found some men looking at her dirtily. She hated it all the more. Probably she lost her friends in the darkness. It was actually a pud..not disc she concluded!

And there she found Aryan on the bar..Sitting with a drink in his hands…his eyes closed! She was shocked to see him like that!!!

Aryan was lost in his world and was about to sip another drink when he felt someone hold his hand firmly. He tried to look at the face in that condition and found the most beautiful face looking at him angrily..her eyes were red and her nostrils flared! He smiled thinking it to be a fragment of imagination.. she looks beautiful when she gets angry… and she becomes completely red when she cries! He giggled at his though and then he heard her sharp tone!

Mr. Aryan chauhan..what the hell do you think you are doing?

It took him some time to register what was going on and she had to shake him to get him back to his senses! He shook his head and looked at her… this time properly and managed to mumble, “ge..geet..tum yahan?

And the next moment he felt himself being dragged out and much to his surprise, he followed her like an obedient kid!!!

Present

He looked at her on the dance floor and smiled. she had brought him back home and the next day she had give him a huge lecture on his conduct. And when she asked what was the reason of him being in that ‘dirty, uncivilized and dingy’ place he had replied softly saying, “its was an escape from reality…his temporary refuge!!!”

He smiled a bit..actually he didn’t know what he should feel..happy or sad!!! That was the biggest confusion in this whole thing! Roops was standing alone in a corner. Geet pulled her to the dance floor but she kept refusing all the time. Even Aryan insisted but she refused!

Geet teased, “ohh..naye naye naina mere dhoondhe hain..dar-badar kyun tujhe..mein pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan…”

Roops: shut up..go and enjoy yourself!

Geet rolled her eyes and went ahead. Aryan stayed with Roops!

Roops: Aryan.. you should join her…!

Aryan: no..thats fine! Am seeing her this happy after a long long time..so trying to cherish this moment! Its strange isn’t it.. to change from someone who you are to someone who you are not!!!

He went ahead to attend a call leaving Roops to ponder over his words! And that’s when someone hugged him from the back. she smiled…it was Prem. He was getting back almost after a month!!! She turned around and hugged him tight!!! Geet looked at them from afar..they looked so cute together.. and Roops… she was so happy with him..so content!!! She shook her head to get away from all the feelings or the little bit of pain and went to the bar. She saw two people competing in who takes the largest number of shots. Others were cheering them. Probably some celebration for them! Hey wait a minute..it was a celebration for her too… and she will celebrate!

Aryan found Roops and Prem talking.

Aryan: have you seen geet?

Prem: nahi yaar..i havnt seen her since the time I have come! Where is she?

Roops: dance floor pe tho thi na…

Aryan: yeah but she is not there….and not taking her call either!

They heard a bunch of people cheering, “geet… geet..

They ran to the crowd and saw geet getting ready for her tequila shots!

Roops ran to geet and pulled her, “geet..kya kar rahi hai? Its stupid!

Geet: relax..just a small celebration! I’ll be fine!!!

Aryan: Ms Geet Handa..what the hell are you doing?

She looked at him for a while..it was the same way as she had asked him when she had found him in that ‘dirty, uncivilized and dingy’ place of hers. She       smiled and continued with the game!!!

3..2..1..go! and they started! Roops was shocked to see geet taking shots like that..probably for the 1st time she was taking this much. Roops knew geet attended discs and had shots too but it was like once a while and she’d always go for softer ones and hardly one or two.

Geet took in a shot..and another..and another….roops held her hand!

geet..no!!!

Geet sipped another!!!!! She was already feeling dizzy..and light headed!

Roops: geet stop it..its your 5th shot already!!! Please..stop..

Geet ignored…she was happy and she will enjoy!!! She won the slot with 8 shots and she stumbled! Aryan missed ‘geet’…he missed ‘geet’ terribly! He had no idea how to bring that old geet back…she has changed completely! And he didn’t say anything to her either! He simply lifted her up and walked out. prem and Roops were supposed to go for dinner..but seeing geet like that..prem understood there was a bigger reason behind it. He cancelled the dinner and ordered dinner for four of them at Aryan’s place!!!

Aryan drove geet and Roops came with Prem in his car.

Prem: so what was that big celebration there han?

Roops sighed and noticed the same magazine in Prem’s car. She took the magazine and showed him the cover page!!!

Roops: I seriously hate this man now….

Prem focused on the road and smirked, “so do I!!!

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Geet had dozed off in the car itself. Aryan carried her into her room and made her lie on the bed. She had a smile on lips yet tear drops at the corner of her eyes! He wiped that lone tear and kissed her forehead!!

Aryan: you are an angel geet… just ask me..and I’ll set you free!!!

Meanwhile in Delhi

Dia: namla..dekho…meli flock (=frock)

Namra: chalo chalo packing karo..

Maan came into their room..he was just back from office and heard noises from his princesses room. He peeped in and looked at the cuties trying to get their things ready to leave for Mumbai. He stood there for a while watching them…he smiled and saw dia having troubles in doing her clothes..and even namra. They are sooo small!!!! His eyes filled up…the nanny cannot stay with them 24/7 right!!! Wish he could fill that empty space in their lives!!!

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next: Mumbai…here we go!!!!

 
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Posted by on 23/08/2012 in ~Parineeta~